Drop of love (treinando texto com if)

por tiatalli Dom 03 Jan 2016, 20:50

If the water purifies, your hug is waterfall.
If the food make us strong, your friendship is bean stew
Rice, meat
Fruit Salad
God, in my mirror I see Popeye!
If the antivirus protect against malware
You is the computer, I'm your Norton
Do you like this words?
You share refreshing water out of your mouth
You gimme your drops of love.
And we create the river of kindness
Nice life is the good feelings

Algum erro? Quem quiser colocando mais frases pode Smile

por Matheus José Seg 04 Jan 2016, 09:43

your hug is a waterfall.
your friendship is a bean stew.
A nice life is the good feelings.
Costuma-se colocar artigo nesse tipo de estrutura.

You is are the computer and I'm your Norton
Com You a forma do verbo to be é are. Acho que fica mais bonito com and ao invés da vírgula.

Bonito texto.

por Kobalt42 Seg 04 Jan 2016, 14:20

tiatalli escreveu:If the water purifies, your hug is waterfall.
If the food make us strong, your friendship is bean stew
Rice, meat
Fruit Salad
God, in my mirror I see Popeye!
If the antivirus protect against malware
You is the computer, I'm your Norton
Do you like this words?
You share refreshing water out of your mouth
You gimme your drops of love.
And we create the river of kindness
Nice life is the good feelings

Algum erro? Quem quiser colocando mais frases pode

You is are the computer, I'm your Norton
Do you like ~~this~~ these words? -> Plural de "this"

Sugestão -

If ~~the~~ food make us strong, your friendship is a bean stew

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